--- its_demo_v1_1_readme.txt.orig	2013-01-06 11:29:56.667686561 +0900
+++ its_demo_v1_1_readme.txt	2013-01-06 11:50:58.611645094 +0900
@@ -46,8 +46,8 @@
                   Qme 3.0 / 3.1 by Rene Post (mostly for static models)
                   AdQuedit 1.3 by Hicks Goldrush (used for sprites)
 
-engine:           This demo has been designed and tested to *ONLY* work
-                  with the following engines:
+engine:           This demo has been designed and tested to work with
+                  *ONLY* the following engines:
 
 FitzQuake 0.85 (http://www.celephais.net/fitzquake/)
 Mark V (http://www.celephais.net/board/view_thread.php?id=60831)
@@ -85,13 +85,13 @@
 * Five shadow hint books added, scattered through bonus maps
 * All books stay open when touch by the player and particle effect is updated when read
 * Skill runes changed to easily show which is active, new particle effect
-* Nightmare mode removed from rune pillars, console only at the moment
+* Nightmare mode removed from rune pillars, currently only via the console
 * Stealth Alcoves no longer work if stealth mode is disabled (setup wrong)
 * All slime areas have acid burning ambience to better hint at danger
 * Added footsteps to all monsters/players (off by default)
 * Added option to change texture filter mode (pixel mode on by default)
 * Added more AI route notes to bonus maps and fixed a couple of errors
-* Spike and Electric traps do 4x damage to monsters only
+* Spike and Electric traps do 4x damage only to monsters
 * Backpacks are properly removed by the amulet if they drop
 * Wizard can be setup properly as a turret (no longer moves around)
 * Range enemies will always fire at range targets first before getting close
@@ -114,7 +114,7 @@
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 * Learn to use the walk ability of quake (+run to toggle the feature)
 * Complete the tutorial section of the start map, it was designed to help
-* Use the axe (from behind only) to strike the killing blow
+* Use the axe (only from behind) to strike the killing blow
 * Remember to use the eye above all enemies to judge wakeup distance
 * The eye works as follows; green = go, yellow = caution, red = danger!
 * Do not stay close to the AI when the stealth eye turns red (timer)
@@ -132,14 +132,14 @@
 * Enemies will turn around if you stand behind them for too long (timer)
 * There is an endless supply of distraction bolts, use them!
 * Try to avoid direct fights with enemies, they do huge amounts of damage
-* Hitting enemies with distraction bolts only does 1 point of damage
+* Hitting enemies with distraction bolts does only 1 point of damage
 * Hitting enemies with the axe still does 20 points of damage
-* Enemies can only be distracted if stationary, patrols are not affected
+* Enemies can be distracted only if stationary, patrols are not affected
 * Use distraction bolts to turn enemies around (they will turn back - timer)
 * Hit enemies from behind with distraction bolts to make them investigate
 * Duck behind cover if firing a bolt in the face of an enemy
 * Be careful attacking enemies if another enemy can see what you are doing
-* The stealth axe only does a maximum of 350 damage to enemies health
+* The stealth axe does a maximum of only 350 damage to enemies health
 * Enemies with large amount of health need to be poisoned first
 * Weaken enemies with poison and then attack with the axe to kill them
 * Poison bolts are a limited supply, use them wisely and look for more
@@ -159,7 +159,7 @@
 * To change skill level touch the rune pillars at the beginning
 * All encounters in the map are dynamically created based on skill level
 * The skill level can be changed at anytime from the console by typing 'skill'
-* Nightmare skill level is only available via the console for the moment
+* Nightmare skill level is available only via the console for the moment
 * Monster counts will vary because of the dynamic skill system
 * Secret count does not vary, too confusing otherwise
 * Contains a tutorial section for stealth training (underneath sword room)
@@ -182,7 +182,7 @@
 * To start the map from the console type 'map s1m1' or 'map s1m2'
 * Easy/Normal/Hard Skill levels are fully supported (unique setup)
 * To change skill level touch the rune pillars at the beginning of the map
-* Nightmare skill level is only available via the console for the moment
+* Nightmare skill level is available only via the console for the moment
 * All encounters in the map are dynamically created based on skill level
 * The skill level can be changed at anytime from the console by typing 'skill'
 * Monster counts will vary because of the dynamic skill system
@@ -212,7 +212,7 @@
 Impulse 247 - Toggle texture filtering on/off
 Impulse 249 - Toggle footsteps on/off
 
-AI Testing (dev mode only)
+AI Testing (only in dev mode)
 Impulse 200 - drops a ghost marker
 Impulse 201 - drops a volume marker
 Impulse 205 - Find nearest node to ghostmarker